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Comic: Nazangul Page 2

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Second page of an old RP scene with Twit, Hawl and Claster.
First: fav.me/d96yoc8
Next: fav.me/d97g19l


Little explanation: Claster and Hawl went back to the Rakazel pirates because Grendl needs Ylan's help. On their way they found a bunch of innocent dead citizens who became victims of Hawl's and Twit's attack. Actually I wanted to skip this page, because I am afraid Hawl could be mistaken as a crybaby. He's really not sensitive but while he acts regal and composed all the time, he can be quite emotional too when it comes to heavy feelings. In this scene Hawl realized how much responsibility really rests on his shoulders. War took a different direction when his best ally (Twit) rebel against him. In the end I have chosen to add the page because I liked the situation and I hope it gives a bit more meaning to the next pages.

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Bistraja's avatar

Goo, goo Eni! Five pages are so ambitious, and these page aren't even a4, they seem longer! Good use of the very spare palette, creatomg depth or sperate characters.

I love Claster's face in the second to last panel, it feels like he has wind in his hair from movement and his gaze is quite cold, not judging though, just telling the hard truth as it is.

Ah, men crying is so nice, meheh! But I didn't see Hawl as a crybaby, rather more empathic to mindless killing and suffering.

Twit in the previous page was quite fu, twisting and turning as the little creepy snake he is. Lots of nice, bony hands on that page! :love:

 

I'm dying to see more!

 

Small, insignificant detail... Did Hawl lose his crown in the battle? 8,D