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Comicstrip: Bodyforming

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Here's a new short Comicstrip with our OCs Hawl and Claster.
I wanted to give a feeling for their early relationship, when they started to be "teacher and student".

Hawl is very euphoric and willing to practise his skills with the sword but when he asked Claster to train him to beat Vermillion he never thought of these training methods. Well, he's good with the sword but he never really had to train hard and Claster is a very strict teacher, I can tell. So, use it or lose it.
Like most young people Hawl thinks he allready knows everything better, and sometimes he has to be reminded that he's not. Well, it can bring you down when someone is chilling while you work hard XD Claster wants to help Hawl but he isn't the one who plan to beat one of the strongest men ever.

My sister drew an illustration related to this: fav.me/d8bb12p

Edit: Mids asked me to fix Claster's inner mouth on panel four a bit. And I added a bit more blush on Sporty-Hawl's face.

Hawl is my OC and Claster belongs to :iconm-i-d-s:
More short comics and stuff here :iconrevenge-of-rakazel:
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NikeMV's avatar
Yeeeeeaah, comic! :happybounce:
I love seeing everyday moments, according to me they are the best to understand the characters' personnalities. And you can easily tell hom much motivated Hawl is! He's so tender, a bit confused but still acually strong :D And I love his face in the 6th scene, aww! And Claster, you cruel guy, seems like you're enjoying this! :D
Good work. Can't wait to see more *thumbs up*